Aluvus
11-04-2005, 02:27 PM
There's a minor typo on the "About (http://www.slickdeals.net/category/about/)" page, in the mission statement. I noticed because someone copy/pasted it onto a Wikipedia page.
"Our site's mission is to provide its visitors, opportunities to maximize their online and offline shopping dollars."
It shouldn't have a comma. I know, this seems nit-picky.
If I may humbly suggest a revision to the first paragraph:
Welcome to SlickDeals.net, an online resource dedicated to making it easier to find deals on the Internet. Our site's mission is to help visitors get the most for their online and offline shopping dollars. There are several things you should know about Slickdeals:
I know it's not the most critical page on the site (and I'm guessing, not one of the most viewed), but "anything worth doing is worth doing well".
"Our site's mission is to provide its visitors, opportunities to maximize their online and offline shopping dollars."
It shouldn't have a comma. I know, this seems nit-picky.
If I may humbly suggest a revision to the first paragraph:
Welcome to SlickDeals.net, an online resource dedicated to making it easier to find deals on the Internet. Our site's mission is to help visitors get the most for their online and offline shopping dollars. There are several things you should know about Slickdeals:
I know it's not the most critical page on the site (and I'm guessing, not one of the most viewed), but "anything worth doing is worth doing well".