thats why i put the part that read 'this is the next best deal.'
you read that part right?
This is not "the next best deal" either. It stopped being the next best deal the minute the New Egg deal expired. This is actually THE BEST deal right now. You can't compare a live deal with an expired deal. It doesn't work that way. The fact that you talked about the New Egg deal in present tense gives readers the impression that it's still valid. I didn't correct your whole statement. Just 1 word.