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forum threadArjun.B posted Jan 25, 2024 11:26 PM
forum threadArjun.B posted Jan 25, 2024 11:26 PM

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Express has 40-60% off on clearance

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https://www.express.com/mens-clot..._CLEARANCE

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Jan 25, 2024 11:49 PM
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Jan 25, 2024 11:49 PM
majorhavocJan 25, 2024 11:49 PM
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OP, before you endure a flood of thumbs down, consider adding a bit more information in your post. This is an express sale for ... what?
Jan 26, 2024 12:24 AM
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ButcherboyJan 26, 2024 12:24 AM
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Quote from majorhavoc :
OP, before you endure a flood of thumbs down, consider adding a bit more information in your post. This is an express sale for ... what?


agreed and I thumbed the post down
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Jan 26, 2024 04:37 PM
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Arjun.B
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Jan 26, 2024 04:37 PM
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Quote from majorhavoc :
OP, before you endure a flood of thumbs down, consider adding a bit more information in your post. This is an express sale for ... what?
A novice aiming to contribute something beneficial to the community, motivated by a desire to assist rather than gain. I'll gladly welcome your valuable feedback to enhance and refine the content. Thanks for thumbs 👍🏼 (Accept both ups and downs) Keep sharing.
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Jan 26, 2024 04:38 PM
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Jan 26, 2024 04:38 PM
Arjun.B
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Jan 26, 2024 04:38 PM
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Quote from Butcherboy :
agreed and I thumbed the post down
A novice aiming to contribute something beneficial to the community, motivated by a desire to assist rather than gain. I'll gladly welcome your valuable feedback to enhance and refine the content. Thanks for thumbs 👍🏼 (Accept both ups and downs) Keep sharing.
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Jan 26, 2024 11:39 PM
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Jan 26, 2024 11:39 PM
majorhavocJan 26, 2024 11:39 PM
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Quote from Arjun.B :
A novice aiming to contribute something beneficial to the community, motivated by a desire to assist rather than gain. I'll gladly welcome your valuable feedback to enhance and refine the content. Thanks for thumbs (Accept both ups and downs) Keep sharing.
Certainly. Consider your title. Two words: "Express" and "Sale". That's it. Nothing else to give your fellow SD'ers any idea of what you're talking about. It will not be be obvious to people that "Express" is the name of a vendor. Or for the who are aware "Express" is the name of a vendor, that the word, as used in this particular case, is in fact referring to that particular retailer.

In either event, the reader has no idea what the sale is for. Nor will it trigger anyone's deal alert for say, "Mens Clothing". The text of your deal post doesn't really help matters unless the reader spots "mens-clot" in the truncated url and puts two-and-two together.

The only way anyone can know what you're talking about is to
1) Note your title,
2) Take the time to click on it, and then
3) Take more time to click on the url and navigate to the site.

At which point, you've wasted everyone's time except for someone currently in the market for a deal on men's clothing. OK, not 'everyone'. Many will simply not bother drilling down into a vague, sparsely-worded deal post. Including a good portion of people who are currently in the market for a deal on men's clothing. The people you want to assist and bring benefit to.

How's this for a title:

"40% - 60% off clearance on mens clothing at Express.com"

The trick is to assume that your fellow SD'ers cannot read your mind.

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